Chapter 1: Sylvia
The Warwick/Ottila opening is gone, and the original Ch 2 is now Ch 1. Prue attempts to get her younger sister Sylvia out of bed, she resists, etc. When she's working in her garden she wears a short skirt, not trousers. Thus Moor's thoughts are different - "What a changeful thing it is! haunting one's premises unseen, and stealing one's books unsuspected; dreaming one half the day and masquerading the other half. What will happen next? Let us see but not be seen, lest the boy turn shy and run away before the pretty play is done!" becomes “What a changeful thing it is! haunting one's premises unseen, and stealing one's books unsuspected; dreaming one half the day and working hard the other half. What will happen next?"
Sylvia decides that Moor could be her friend.
Chapter 2: Moor
She returns Goethe's Wilhelm Meister to him and they walk in his garden with Tilly, the gardener's little girl. “It is so old-fashioned and well kept,” she says. He describes the uses of each herb. She asks if the bees ever sting Tilly and he says, no, children and animals understand one another. Some people like his friend never lose this understanding.( Read more... )
The Warwick/Ottila opening is gone, and the original Ch 2 is now Ch 1. Prue attempts to get her younger sister Sylvia out of bed, she resists, etc. When she's working in her garden she wears a short skirt, not trousers. Thus Moor's thoughts are different - "What a changeful thing it is! haunting one's premises unseen, and stealing one's books unsuspected; dreaming one half the day and masquerading the other half. What will happen next? Let us see but not be seen, lest the boy turn shy and run away before the pretty play is done!" becomes “What a changeful thing it is! haunting one's premises unseen, and stealing one's books unsuspected; dreaming one half the day and working hard the other half. What will happen next?"
Sylvia decides that Moor could be her friend.
Chapter 2: Moor
She returns Goethe's Wilhelm Meister to him and they walk in his garden with Tilly, the gardener's little girl. “It is so old-fashioned and well kept,” she says. He describes the uses of each herb. She asks if the bees ever sting Tilly and he says, no, children and animals understand one another. Some people like his friend never lose this understanding.( Read more... )
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